The aim of this thesis is to trace how David Lodge's fictional piece "Nice Work" (1984) subverts the compositional principles of the canonical realist novel by undermining the principle of mimesis through different devices: firstly, through narratological devices such as the choice of intrusive narrator and the device of “breaking frame” and secondly, through discursive devices such as transtextuality mainly intertextuality, paratextuality, metatextuality and hypertextuality and parody. This thesis then purports to trace these elements and to delve into the undermining effects these devices have on the compositional principles of realist fiction.
To live in the world without becoming
Aware of the meaning of the world is
Like wandering about in a great library
Without touching the books
The secret teaching of all Ages
All great fiction, to a large extent, is a reflection on itself rather than a reflection of reality.
ACKNOWLEDGMENTS
I would like to express my gratitude to my tutor, Dr. Cecilia Acquarone for her generous help and expert guidance on the development of my research paper.
My sincerest thanks are also due to my husband, Jose Luis, my three daughters Lourdes, Julieta and Emilia; my parents Osvaldo and Mirta and my friend, Maria Jose Maruenda, for all their support and encouragement.
1. INTRODUCTION
The aim of this thesis is to trace how David Lodge's fictional piece Nice Work (1984) subverts the compositional principles of the canonical realist novel by undermining the principle of mimesis through different devices: firstly, through narratological devices such as the choice of intrusive narrator and the device of “breaking frame” and secondly, through discursive devices such as transtextuality mainly intertextuality, paratextuality, metatextuality and hypertextuality and parody. This thesis then purports to trace these elements and to delve into the undermining effects these devices have on the compositional principles of realist fiction.
2. THEORETICAL PERSPECTIVE
In the 20th century it was common to heed two different
theoretical approaches when attempting to explain the nature of language.
One of these approaches could be summarised in what Taylor calls the
Designative Theory
(Taylor 1985) which regards language as transparent.
As Taylor postulates, according to this theory, words or signs acquire
meaning by pointing to objects in the real world. The other approach, which
Taylor names the Expressive Approach
(Ibid.) accounts for meaning by
considering language as a constituent of thought rather than as a form of
naming an external reality. These two philosophical perspectives on
language are vital when discussing realist fiction because Fundamentally,
in literature, realism is the portrayal of life with fidelity
(Cuddon
1999). Thus, when considering realist fiction, attention must be paid to
the use of language for, realism is not a direct or simple reproduction of
reality (a 'slice of life') but a system of conventions producing a
lifelike illusion of some 'real' world outside the text, by processes of
selection, exclusion, description, and manners of addressing the reader
(Baldick 1990). Therefore, this thesis aims to study, on the one hand, the
conventions employed to create this reality effect
as Roland Barthes
terms it, and on the other, to inspect with even closer attention how those
principles of verisimilitude and mimesis are undermined in
Nice Work through a variety of discursive and narratological
devices.
Another perspective to the study of language in the previous century was
that of the linguist Roman Jakobson. In his seminal paper, The Metaphoric
and Metonymic poles
Jakobson defined language as a bipolar structure
since its use involves two basic operations present in any language:
selection
and combination
(Jakobson 1956). Metaphor belongs to the
selection axis while metonymy, to the combination one. In every speech act
the metonymic and the metaphoric poles are continually operative but, due
to certain preferences as well as to differences in cultural patterns, one
of the poles may prevail over the other at any one time. Jakobson went
further to claim that the metaphoric pole is governed by the principle of
analogy, similarity, dissimilarity, and selection, and that this pole is
paradigmatic and synchronic and that its main figure of speech is metaphor,
which establishes a relation of substitution in absence. Conversely, the
metonymic pole is ruled by combination and its main figures of speech are
metonymy and synecdoche, that is to say, relations in presence.
Jakobson's postulates are fundamental for the study of Realism since in
general, Realism underscores the idea of an unproblematic relationship
between the signifier or the name and the signified or object. From the
perspective of Jakobson’s linguistic model, following the path of
contiguous relationships, the realist author metonymically digresses from
the plot to the atmosphere and from the characters to the setting in space
and time. He is fond of synecdochic details
(2000:57). Although much of
the prose of Nice Work seems to follow the organizational
principles of Realism, nonetheless, the metonymic contiguity mentioned by
Jakobson is on many occasions disrupted or subverted, if only temporarily
and briefly, by certain linguistic and narratological devices. Thus, this
thesis proposes that such devices as the intrusive narrator, the use of the
device of breaking frame
, transtextuality as intertexuality,
metatextuality, metafiction and parody hold in check the contiguous flow of
metonymic, realist prose by subverting the boundaries of the canonical
realist novel.
Thus, the Designative model of language which seems to underlie traditional
realist fiction, gives way in Lodge’s Nice Work to a more
Expressive
approach which disrupts the transparent one-to-one
correspondence between the linguistic sign and a reality out there
. As
this study seeks to examine to what extent David Lodge’s Nice Work
complies with realist tenets, on the one hand, and to what extent he
subverts them, on the other, the starting point for this thesis is to study
the theoretical tenets underlying the realist tradition.
According to Harmon (1995), Realism is a literary school that rose to
existence between the decline of Romanticism and the birth of Symbolism and
that stands opposed to both. Alternatively, Realism defines a literary
method, a philosophical and social attitude, and a particular range of
subject matter. Realism tries to break with the classical demands of art to
show life as it should be in order to show life as it is
(Lodge
1977).That is, in an attempt to show life as it is, language is used as a
transparent medium. Realism considers that there is a one–to–one
relationship between the signifier and the signified. But to describe life
as it is, Realism has to erase the marks of its own construction and has to
hide that fiction is in fact an illusion. Structuralists like Roland
Barthes call this the reality effect.
Barthes was also interested in how
the syntagmatic axis of a given literary text worked. What aroused Barthes’
curiosity was the presence of certain superfluous descriptive details which
in his paper The Reality Effect
(1968) he calls notations.
These
notations are superfluous
or scandalous
details that are simply there,
so to speak, scattered in the text and included only as filling
details
whose only function is to correspond to a kind of narrative luxury, lavish
to the point of offering many futile details
(141). Thus, whereas some
details are meaningful and necessary to the account because they either
have a symbolic or structural value, notations are useless and their
function according to Barthes is purely summatory
, i.e., their function
is to add to the Reality effect rather than advance the narrative or
develop any one character(143). In the chapters that follow, then,
Barthes’s notions will be applied to the analysis of passages where this
superfluous notation is a predominant device in the construction of the
reality effect of the novel.
As for the philosophical doctrine on which Realism is based three theories
are worth noting. As Harmon (1995) makes clear, Realism is based on
Rationalism, Positivism and Empirism. Rationalism is about any one view
appealing to reason as a source of knowledge or justification. It is a
theory in which the criterion of truth is intellectual and deductive.
Rationalists consider that knowledge is gained through reason and it is
a priori. The second approach is Empiricism. Empiricists claim
that experience is the ultimate source of all our concepts and that
knowledge is a posteriori. Finally, the third theory is
Positivism.Positivism is a philosophy of science and it is based on the
idea that information comes from logical and mathematical treatment and
that scientific knowledge is the only valid truth. In this thesis the
logical development of certain passages at paragraph level, rather than at
the level of the sentence,is suddenly dislocated or disrupted to give way
to illogical
or asyntagmatic
elements . These illogical
devices are
the intrusive narrator and many other devices for breaking frame
which
will be analyzed in detail in the chapters that follow.
Additionally, in order to see to what an extent Nice Work complies with Realism at the level of textual cohesion and coherence, Halliday and Hasan’s (1991) framework for the analysis of these textual dimensions will be used. Cohesion is the linguistic means by which a text functions as a single unit. Coherence, on the other hand, refers to those linguistic features that combine to make a text meaningful to the readers. The study of both elements helps to see whether Realism follows undisturbed the temporal and spatial contiguity of the metonymic principle and to see whether and to what an extent these elements contribute to creating the reality effect. In the analysis sections coherence and cohesion will be studied through a tracing of lexical chains of co-reference and co-extension. This will allow us to see how the internal coherence and cohesion of a realist text is maintained, and where and how they are disrupted.
The theoretical guidelines for the textual analysis of the realist movement
proposed by Hamon (1982) will also be applied to Nice Work (1988).
As a structuralist, Hamon opposes the notion that Realism is a copy of
reality, and concentrates on the study of the characteristics of Realism as
a discourse. He identifies certain hallmarks of realist discourse such as
the imposition of common and proper names, the overloading of the text with
details (Barthes’s notations
), a marked excess of information, a peculiar
mode of ordering marked by tight logical cohesion and coherence, a high
degree of redundancy and ritualization of daily activities.
Our thesis will therefore focus on the following aspects of canonical Realism: the use of reference, logical ordering and coherence, redundancy and ritualization of activities. Likewise, our thesis will then proceed to study all the discursive and narratological devices that debunk the compositional principles mentioned above.
As mentioned in the introduction, this theoretical framework will be the
basis for the study of the linguistic devices that allow Realism to create
the textual effect of verisimilitude as well as those devices that break
with this illusion.Verisimilitude
, is the mask which is assumed by the
laws of the text and that we are meant to take for a relation with reality
(Todorov 83).
Although in Realism the metonymic pole prevails, it is our hypothesis that Lodge introduces such textual devices as transtextuality, metafiction and postmodern parody in order to subvert that apparently unmediated relation of the text with reality that Realism seems to purport.
Gerard Genette, a French theorist and critic, expounds a coherent theory of
what he refers to as transtextuality
. In his own words, transtextuality
is all that sets the text in relationship, whether obvious or concealed
with other texts
(Genette 1992: 83-84). This theorist classifies the term
transtextuality in five categories: intertextuality, paratextuality,
metatextuality, hypertextuality and architextuality.
Intertextuality is a relationship of co-presence between two texts or
among several texts
and the actual presence of one text within another
(Genette 1992:1-2). In discursive terms, intertextuality is a crucial
device in the novel. According to Fairclough (1992), the intertextuality of
texts substantially complicates the processes of text interpretation for in
order to make sense of texts, interpreters have to find ways of fitting the
diverse elements of a text into a coherent, though not necessarily unitary,
determinate or unambivalent whole (141). Intertextuality is a vital element
of Nice Work as many intertextual fragments from critical theory,
creative writing, feminism, and the theory of literary Realism are
interspersed throughout the many different chapters breaking with the unity
of the realist text by drawing attention to the text's own compositional
principles and in this way subverting the literary tradition to which this
novel contradictorily pays homage.
The second type of transtextuality is paratextuality. The paratext in Genette’s approach are the elements at the entrance of the text, which contribute to direct and control the reception of a text by its readers. This threshold comprises a peritext which includes elements as titles, prefaces, captions, illustrations, epigraphs, etc which may have an effect on the interpretation of the text and an epitext which are aspects outside the text as interviews, publicity announcements, private letters and etc. Thus, the paratext is the sum of the peritext and the epitext.
The third type of transtextuality is metatextuality which unites a given
text to another, of which it speaks without necessarily citing it (without
summoning it) in fact sometimes even without naming it
(Genette 1997a: 4).
The fourth type of transtextuality is hypertextuality which involves any
relationship uniting a text B (which I shall call hypertext) to an earlier
text A (I shall , of course, call hypotext) , upon which it is grafted in a
manner that is not that of commentary
(Genette 1997 a: 5). Thus,
hypertextuality means the relationship between a text and a text or genre
on which it is based but which it transforms, modifies , elaborates or
extends (including parody , sequel, etc).
Postmodern parody is a kind of hypertextuality used to undermine the
syntagmatic or metonymic flow of the text. On the one hand, parody
establishs a formal relation between two texts by way of imitation, but
this is a sort of imitation characterized by a reversal of the canonical
conventions of fiction. Thus, parody trans-contextualize[s]
(Hutcheon
1985:10) the new work. In other words, parody gives the new work a new
context or a different one from the one commonly associated to the
original
. Postmodern parody and intertextuality seem to be alike,
nonetheless it is important to bear in mind that both include the text and
the reader but parody also involves the entire context.
Finally, the fifth type of transtextuality is architextuality which
connects the designation of the text with a part of the genre o genres.
According to Genette (1997), a crucial element of this type is the
reader‘s expectation, and thus their reception of the work
.
On balance, Genette considers that the five types of transtextuality have a reciprocal relationship between them. All kinds of transtextuality add metaphorical elements to a text and then contribute to make it multiple, more complex and less lineal. As a consequence the text moves away from the characteristic coherence of metonymy and hence from Realism.
The fact that the imposition of names, co-referentiality, co-extension,
redundancy and ritualization of daily activities can make the novel
Nice Work comply with the realist principles, it can be said that
the choice of the intrusive narrator, the device of breaking frame
,
metafiction and transtextuality, on the other hand, may subvert the
composition allaws of Realism present in it.
3. METHODOLOGY
3.1. Hypothesis
The choice of metafictional devices such as the intrusive narrator, the
device of breaking frame
and the presence of transtextuality as parody,
intertextuality, metatextuality and paratextuality seem to subvert the
rationalist empiricist material in Nice Work and produce a
multiplicity of meanings, thus providing a revised definition of Realism.
3.2. Corpus of analysis
The corpus of analysis comprises selected passages from Nice Work, a novel by David Lodge (1988), where the devices that underlie realist fiction are both created and sustained for a while only to be subverted and dislocated soon after.
3.3. Treatment of the corpus of analysis
The first phase of this research will be concerned with the examination of the traditional concept of Realism in literature and Lodge’s specific view of this concept. Realist ingredients present in the selected passages from Nice Work will be analysed following Hamon’s theoretical tenets (1982). Halliday and Hasan will also be used in this phase mostly to analyze modes of ordering, logical cohesion and coherence (Halliday 1991). Repetition, antonymy and a clear use of reference will be considered so as to see whether the text is cohesive or not. Then, the use of proper and common names will be studied, in order to delve into the referential function of language in realist fiction.
The second phase will comprise the study of metafiction, such as the
intrusive narrator and devices for breaking frame
, and the study of
transtextuality mainly intertexuality, metatextuality, paratextuality and
hypertextuality, as Genette calls them, present in the chosen excerpts of
the story to unveil the subversion of the principles of Realism.
4.ANALYSIS
4.1. Realist features
Realism is an aesthetic mode which emerged from the mid- to late 19
th century as a reaction against Romanticism. It creates the
effect of the representation of the concrete, the immediate and the
individual in their social environment .The realist mode was influenced not
only by the impact of the political and social changes of the 18
th and 19th centuries but also by the industrial and
scientific progress that characterized Modernity. The attempt, however, to
depict reality as something fixed and language as a transparent medium is
fraught with contradictions because one has to use words and words are not
reality but its arbitrary signifiers. Structuralists and poststructuralists
have variously proposed that mimesis or the aesthetic effect of Realism is
produced by using signs, codes and conventions as in all literary mode.
Signs are culturally constructed and if these signs are used in any form
of representation such representation will be tinted with the way that
these signs see the world
(Furst 1992). As a consequence, Realism is as
much a construct as any other form of literature and not as transparent as
it strives to define itself. Indeed, El efecto de la realidad es efecto de
texto y proposición ideológica. Tenemos lo real de un reflejo, no la
realidad sino una imagen mental de la realidad sobredeterminada por un
código sociocultural saturado de lugares comunes, estereotipos,
connotaciones e intertextos
(Duchet 1971). In Nice Work, Lodge
makes use of different devices such as reference, logical coherence and
cohesion and minute description to create the realist effect, whilst all
the time subverting and undermining them in order to show that naïve
Realism is no longer possible in the 20th and 21st
centuries.
4.1.1. Logical coherence and cohesion
Realism makes use of cohesion and coherence to produce meaning and to create the effect of verisimilitude. According to Halliday and Hasan (1976) a text is considered as a semantic unit of meaning. What makes any length of text meaningful and coherent is texture.
Ruquaia Hasan defines texture as the property of
connectedness
(1990:70).Texture is the foundation for unity and semantic
interdependence within the text. What is essential to the creation of
texture is a set of semantic and lexico-grammatical patterns which are
defined in terms of cohesion. The concept of cohesion is a semantic one and
it includes all the relations of meaning that exist within the text.
Cohesive devices are like signposts that lead the reader on throughout the
text. Cohesion refers to relations of meanings that exist within the text
making the interpretation of one element possible by referring to another.
The term cohesive Tie
is used by Hasan (1985: 90) to refer to one
occurrence of a pair of cohesively related items. Cohesive ties link
individual messages following each other in a text in different ways based
on the nature of meaning relationship which are explained here. Whenever
the relationship of two items depends on the situational identity of
reference, i.e. both refer to an identical entity; the cohesive tie between
them is known as co-referentiality
. The relation of co-referentiality is
typically realized by the devices of reference, such as the pronominals
like “he”, “she”, “it”, etc or by the use of definite article “the” or that
of demonstratives “this”, “those”. In the other kind of meaning relation
which is described as co-classification
the things, processes or
circumstances to which two items refer, belong to an identical class, but
each end of the cohesive tie refers to a distinct member of this class.
Co-classification is generally realized either by substitution or by
ellipsis. The third type of cohesive ties which plays a pivotal role in the
perception of semantic relations in text is co-extension
. Co- extension
is a link which is built through some meaning relation between two
linguistic items that are expressed. Co-extensional ties can be found
between linguistic units, usually referred to as content words
or
lexical items
which are within the same general field of meaning (Halliday
and Hasan 1976).
Many passages taken from Nice Work display a variety of lexical chains that provide internal cohesion. Although the three semantic relations are important in this work only co-referentiality and co-extension will be analyzed in some excerpts of the novel to stand as paradigmatic examples of the functioning of the whole.
- Co-referentiality
In Nice Work, there are clear examples of co-referentiality. Every member of a chain refers to the same thing, event, attribute or relation. The following examples substantiate these claims:
Monday, January 13 th, 1986. Victor Wilcox lies awake,
In the dark bedroom, waiting for his quark alarm clock to
Bleep. It is set to do this at 6.45. How long he has to wait
He doesn’t know. (13)
Robyn rises somewhat later than Vic this dark
January Monday. Her alarm clock, a replica of an
old-fashioned instrument purchased from Habitat,
with an analogue dial and a little brass bell on the top,
rouses her froma deep sleep at 7.30. (41)
The chain Vic
links up with his
and he
on page 12 and Robyn
ties in
with her
and she
on pages 39 to 41.These pages show examples of tight
cohesion through this identity chain. Every member of the chain refers
anaphorically to the same person, Vic
or Robyn
.
These particular chains are text exhaustive, that is to say, they run from
the start to the end of the selected passage focusing on Vic and Robyn.
Each occurrence of the pronominals she
or her
and of the possessive
adjective her
and possessive pronoun hers
links anaphorically to all
its predecessors up to and including the initial reference to Robyn and
his
and he
to Vic. In its respect for tight internal cohesion, then,
the text is highly metonymic and therefore well into the realist tradition.
- Co-extension
According to Hasan (1985), co-extension is the relationship between the
lexical items that have a hand in the same semantic field. The sense
relations are synonymy
. antonymy
and hyponymy
, meronyny
and
repetition
. Added to these instantial ties, Hasan creates equivalence
,
naming
and semblance
. The example quoted above shows a semantic
relation of co-classification between alarm clock
and the phrase a
replica of an old-fashioned instrument
, whereas An analogue dial
and a
little brass bell
are co –meronyms of the co-extension lexical chain for
alarm clock
, which is the corresponding superordinate.
Furthermore, in the short description quoted above, it is impossible to
disregard what Roland Barthes in The Reality Effect
calls a superfluous
notation
in the branding of the alarm clock,
which we are told was
purchased in Habitat (the British equivalent of the department store
Falabella in our city). Lodge may be including this insignificant
detail, knowing only too well that this is just a notation
and therefore
irrelevant detail or it may be argued that it functions as yet another
connotator of Robyn's middle class position much more to the point.
However, the reference to Habitat would never pass unnoticed to a British
person, as it is a well-known furniture store. My argument, however, is
that this is one of those summatory
details that add reality effect and
fulfill the function of anchorage (Barthes); it brings in a whole world
with it.
In S/Z, Roland Barthes proposes that Realism is a discourse constructed on
the imposition of names (1989:192). Or, to put it differently, it is a
discourse which avoids leaving gaps because the lack of names produces a
deflation in the realist illusion
(Ibid). Lodge himself has claimed that
the importance of proper names lies in that they are generally given to
people with a semantic intent (Lodge 1992). They are deictic and point to
the context in order to contribute to the legibility of the text. In
novels, names are never neutral and they always signify. As far as people’s
names go, realist writers prefer worldly names with appropriate
connotations. On the other hand, surnames are generally perceived as
arbitrary. True to theory, Nice Work is overloaded with proper
names which become points of anchorage that ensure the effect of the real.
Vic Wilcox was chosen by David Lodge to suggest not only the idea of a
rather common English name, but also to connote a rather aggressive and
rough masculinity by associating Victor with the lexemes will
and cock
(Lodge 1992: 38). In the case of Robyn Penrose, the name can be related to
the common nouns pen and rose for their contrasting connotations of
literature and beauty. In addition, Robin or Robyn is used as a familiar
form for Roberta, as we learn later on in the novel. This androgynous name
(Robert/a) comically makes Vic expect a man called Robin to appear in the
factory, when it is in fact the female Robyn who turns up (Lodge 1992:38).
Other names that appear in the novel are some geographical names such as Rummidge, Sussex, Cambridge and Melbourne. Rummidge is a fictional city, with imaginary factories and inhabitants situated where Birmingham is and Rummidge University is based on Birmingham University, where Lodge used to teach Modern English Literature.
Common Nouns, on the other hand, are used in order to cover all aspects of
external phenomena. Realist writing shows what Hamon calls horror por el
vacío informativo
(Hamon 1982). So as to avoid any gaps, Realism heavily
relies on idiolect, semantic chains, and a linguistic mosaic
.Thus, in
order to referentially describe
Vic ‘s world Nice Work introduces a greatnumber oflexemes
related to the lexical fields factory/industry (superordinate term) and the
co-meronyms reset
, retool
, firm
, to stop production
, set ups
, and
technical manager
(co-meronyms) (see for example page 79) (Hasan 1985
).Conversely, to mimetically recreate Robyn’s world, the terms that thread
through the text are metonymic message
, semiotics
, signs
,
metaphorical connotation
to mention just a few, all of which refer to her
work as a university lecturer in creative writing (see for example pages
220-22).The superordinate lexemes the university
and the factory
help
to evince the difference between the main characters' worlds: the
university and the factory as they are depicted in the novel, and they also
help to recreate the particular social context in which the plot of the
novel unfolds – i.e the real world in which the characters are
inserted.
According to Lois Tyson in Critical Theory Today (2006),
Human beings try to understand the world through opposites or binary
opposition
. Greima, a structuralist, also considers that:
Human beings make meaning by structuring the world in terms of two kinds of opposed pairs: “A is the opposite of B” and “–A (the negation of A) is the opposite of –B (the negation of B).” In other words, we perceive every entity as having two aspects: its opposite (the opposite of love is hate) and its negation (the negation of love is the absence of love).(Tyson, 2006)
An interesting binary opposition
is expounded in the novel
Nice Work between the two main characters – Robyn and Vic- and
their places of work- the world of industry and the more sophisticated
world of the university. So as to show this antithesis, antonymy will be
discussed. According to Hasan and Halliday (1976:286), antonymy
means
that two lexical items have opposite experiential meanings. Antonymous
words and expressions are observed in Nice Work which draw a
contrasting picture between Robyn
and Vic
and their own worlds.
The filthy dirty industrial era the wilderness of factories and warehouses
and roads and roundabouts, scored with overgrown of railroad cuttings and
obsolete canals like the lines on Mars, itself seemed a shadow land, the
dark side of Rummidge, unknown to those who basked in the light of culture
and learning at the University
is opposed to the green parks of the
University premises. Although the contrast between the two premises shows
the difference between both worlds, the most striking contrast is the
characters’ feelings towards the university and the factory. ForRobyn the
work at the university isnice work,
full of meaning
, and rewarding
,
with decent conditions
and considers the universityas the cathedral of
the modern age
(127). On the other hand, for Vic the University is a
small city state, an academic Vatican
, that it is not able to motivate
students to do proper work
(29) and that it has lax habits
andit is
full of Open –necked shirts and open-ended coffee –breaks
(344).
Vic also finds it difficult to understand professors’ jobs when
he says But reading is the opposite of work
, It’s what you do when you
come home from work, to relax
(334) and Robyn explains to him that the
university is a place where reading is work and what they produce is
meaning.On the other side of the university is the factory. When Robyn
arrives at J. Pringle’s & Sons
to start her Shadow Scheme
she
refers to the factory as the cultural heart of darkness
(141), and then
she continues complaining about The noise. The dirt. The mindless
repetitive work. The everything. That men should have to put up with such
brutalizing conditions.
(120) and that Foundries are dirty
places
and What Wilcox called the machine shop had seemed like a prison
and the foundry had seemed like hell
(121).
Interestingly, the lexeme foundries
stands in a relation of instantial
synonymity with hell
, dirty places
and the simile like a prison
. The
choice of such lexemes allegorizes how Robyn, a woman that belongs to the
cultivated world of the Academy compares the foundry with hell.
Furthermore, the narrator uses adjectives such as silent
, confused
,
battered
and exhausted
and the phrases lost for words
, and uncertain
of her argumentative ground
to describe how astounded Robyn was when she
entered the foundry.
On the contrary, for Vic the foundry is good for the people because it
provides jobs and work
is an indispensable requirement for living.
Moreover, Vic thinks that habits must be stronger in the factory because if
not People would take advantage
of the situation (344).
This divergence between both worlds shows the contextualization of characters, a trait that is a characteristic of Realism, a positivist tradition which sees personality as the result of the determining influence of the environment on characters. As a consequence, the realist establishes the link between character traits and qualities of the environment.
4.1.2. REDUNDANCY
Another hallmark of the mimetic mode that typically signals the realist discourse is redundancy. Redundancy can be defined as a marked excess of information and an overwhelming confidence in the describability of the world (Hamon 1992:172). Realist discourse is often characterized by a super fluidity of detail and by the minute description of physiognomies reducing any potential gaps between the appearance of the characters and actual being (Dario Villanueva 1942). In Nice Work, for instance, Vic stands up in front of the mirror and depicts himself accurately:
He grips the washbasin, leans forward on locked arms, and scans the square face, pale under a forelock of lank brown hair, flecked with grey, the two vertical furrows in the brow like a clip holding the blunt nose in place, the straight –ruled line of mouth, the square –off jaw. (17)
The inclusion of details involves the presentation of objects or features
as they make an impact on all the senses of the perceiver. The technique is
also useful to indirectly describe the character to the reader. On pages
127 and 128 from Nice Work, there are also clear examples of this
insistence on the senses and perception and a superabundance of details:
The air reeked
, it was a place of extreme temperatures
, the windows
(were) nearly opaque with grime
, this space rang with the most barbaric
noise Robyn had ever experienced
, all was noise, smoke, fumes and
flames
, hulks of obsolete machinery crouched, bleeding rust into their
blankets of snow
, all of these details contribute to a notion of
redundancy or superabundance of information.
4.1.3. RITUALIZATION OF DAILY ACTIVITIES
A member of the fictional world in the tradition of Realism needs repeated description of his daily environment and his professional activity to be true to reality. Typical scenes with ritualized daily activities such as meals and religious ceremonies are common in realist texts. In Nice work, the narrator describes Robyn and Vic‘s daily activities and the place where these activities take place- the factory and the university. Vic‘s activities are described in minute detail from the moment he wakes up until he reaches the factory and starts working (see for example pages 13-48).Contrary to expectations, the present tense is used where in narrative the usual choice is the past simple.
The following are examples of Vic’s daily activities:
The alarm clock cheeps
(13).Vic pees, a task requiring considerable care and accuracy since the toilet bowl is low-slung and tapered in shape
(13).He wipes the tidemark of foam from his cheeks and fingers the shaven flesh appraisingly
(17).The kettle boils. Vic makes a pot of strong tea, puts two slices of white bread in the toaster, and opens the louvers of the venetian blinds on the kitchen window to peer into the garden
(19).
As regards Robyn, the narrator describes her daily activities in Chapter 2
where the narrative flow which relates Robyn's daily routine suddenly
becomes interrupted by asides
introduced by the intrusive narrator. In
general, however, the historical present is used to describe Robyn‘s daily
actions, while the past tense is used to signal a sudden shift to one
aside
. In fact, the use of the present gives the account greater
immediacy. We can imagine the action as happening at the same time as we
read:
(Robyn kicks off the duvet and gets out of bed… Is warmer”) (42-43)
The Sussex campus, with its tastefully harmonized buildings in the modernist – Palladian style, arranged in elegant perspective at the foot of the South Downs a few miles outside Brighton, was much admired by architects, but had a somewhat disorienting effect on the young people who came to study here. (43)
Nice Work
relies on the reproduction of the ritualized daily activities and the
excessive use of descriptive realia. It is only the asides
to the reader
that will grossly break with this convention (see next sections for asides
to the reader
). In The Reality Effect
, Barthes posits how the more a
narrative becomes saturated with descriptions, the more it is concomitantly
forced to multiply its empty thematic and its redundancies
(148).
Robyn arranges her notes on the lectern, waiting for latecomers to settle in their seats. The lecture theatre resonates like a drum with the chatter of a hundred –odd students, all talking at once, as if they have just been released from solitary confinement. (71-72)
Vilcox grunted and pushed open the door to let her through.” A foundry is where you melt iron or other metal and pour it into moulds to make castings. Then in the machine shop we mill and grind them and bore holes in them so that they can be assembled into more complex products, like engines. Are you with me? (122)
To sum up, much of the first part of the novel follows the conventions of realist fiction in its minute description of the spatio-temporal setting and by introducing the hero and heroine's worries on Monday morning. The constant mentioning of names to avoid leaving referential gaps as well as the use of redundancy and tight cohesion show that the novel Nice Work has many realist elements conforming to the canonical definition of the form.
In what follows, then, this thesis will delve into the disruptive elements of Realism in Nice Work.
4.2 FEATURES THAT SUBVERT REALISM
As mentioned before, in his novel Nice Work David Lodge introduces metafiction and transtextuality in the form of intertextuality, metatextuality, hypertextuality (postmodern Parody) and paratextual elements that push the borders of the realist novel undermining the compositional principles of verisimilitude.
4.2.1 METAFICTION
Metafiction means a literary work that draws attention to itself and the principles of its construction by using different kinds of techniques and narrative devices such as direct address to the reader, quotations, allusions, parody, irony and intertextuality among others (Waugh 1984).
According to Patricia Waugh, metafiction is …a term given
to fictional writing which self-consciously and systematically draws
attention to its status as an artifact in order to pose questions about the
relationship between fiction and reality. In providing a critique of their
own methods of construction, such writings not only examine the fundamental
structures of narrative fiction, they also explore the possible
fictitiousness of the world outside the literary/fictional text
(1984: 2).
By using metafictional elements, postmodern authors show the divergence
between reality and its linguistic construction ; they point out the
fictionality of fiction, involving the reader in thecreation of meaning
inthe literary (artistic) text and show the difference between the past and
the present forms of art. Lodge, in his book The Art of Fiction
(1992) supports the idea that metafiction foregrounds the gap between art
and life that conventional realism seeks to conceal
(207).
There, he also says that:
….metafictional discourse most commonly occurs in the form of “asides” in novels primarily focused on the traditional novelistic task of describing character and action. These passages acknowledge the artificiality of the conventions of realism even as they employ them ; they disarmcriticism by anticipating it; they flatter the reader by treating him or her as an intellectual equal, sophisticated enough not to be thrown by the admission that a work of fictionis a verbal construction rather than a slice of life.(207)
The reader is addressed several times in the first part of Chapter 2 of
Nice Work to display the novel‘s condition of artifice. The most
striking feature of Chapter 2 of Part One of Nice Work, is the
stepping forward of an intrusive narrator. The intrusive authorial voice
distracts from realist illusion and reduces the emotional intensity of the
experience being represented, by calling the attention to the act of
narrating
(Lodge 1992).This is clearly evinced in Nice Work as
the following excerpt from the novel shows:
And there, for the time being let us leave
Vic Wilcox, while we travel back
an hour or two in time, a few miles in space,
to meet a very different character.(39)
In the passage, the pronouns we
and us
invite the reader to take a
strategic position next to the narrator. Along with these pronouns, the
processes leave
, travel
,and meet
suggest the indirect participation
of the reader in the action anddisclose the act of narrating.
Another narratological device is the so called breaking frame
(Lodge
1992:11) which is a device that brings to the fore a convention of realist
fiction that would otherwise remain suppressed or bracketed off. Goffman
(qtd in Goffman 21) introduces the concept of frames as follows:
When an individual in our Western society recognizes a particular event, he tends, whatever else he does, to imply in this response (and in effect employ) one or more frameworks or schemata of interpretation …[which]is seen as rendering what would otherwise be a meaningless aspect of the scene into something that is meaningful." In other words, frames answer the question “What is going on here?(46)
Frames are used to interpret our experience. For instance, when the
omniscient narrator begins describing Robyn’s morning; a minutia of details
is given regarding her alarm clock, her waking up, her feelings and
thoughts about what is to come later in the morning, and so on. This long
detailed paragraph is suddenly disrupted by a direct question (Who is
Charles?) which suddenly shifts the narrated depiction of Robyn‘s morning
to the background and pushes to the foreground the intrusive narrator’s
direct question, which is addressed to the reader. Thus, the realist frame
of a descriptive passage (Robyn rises somewhat later than Vic...) is
dislocated by an out-frame question (And who is Charles?) which completely
shatters the realist illusion created by the previous paragraph. Hence with
the sentence I will tell you about Charles and other salient facts of her
biography
(41) the narrator reveals himself completely and then he stays
in the background for the rest of the novel providing the reader with the
impression that the novel has been a mockery at the Victorian narrative
instance. Besides, Lodge employs another form of breaking frame which is
known as brackets
by means of which a certain amount of information is
planted amidst the text. The biographical aside is like a bracketed or
parenthetical digression from the main plot, i.e., from the present tense
of the main action here and now (Robyn kicks off the duvet and gets out of
bed
...) (41-42) to the past tense of the biographical aside (she
was born and christened
...). The Realist illusion is shattered here again
because the shift in tenses (From the present of the here and now to the
past tense of the biographical Bracket
) is not smoothly done; it breaks
abruptly with the syntagmatic flow of the description which forms part of
the main story.
4.2.2. TRANSTEXTUALITY
As mentioned before, Gerard Genette claims that the main issue of poetics
is transtextuality, that is to say, all that sets the text in a
relationship, whether obvious or concealed, with other texts
(1997:1).
Although the five types of transtextual relations are important, in Nice Work only intertextuality, paratextuality, metatextuality andhypertextuality will be delved into because these are the most salient in the novel.
4.2.2.1 Intertextuality
The relation text/intertext is present in Nice Work due to its persistent reference to other texts.This relationship is called transtextuality by Genette in Palimpstes (1962) and then intertextuality by a Bulgarian/French theorist Julia Kristeva (1980).
Intertextuality expresses a connection between the texts through various
devices and techniques. In her view, Any text is constructed of a mosaic
of quotations; any text is the absorption and transformation of another
(Kristeva 1980: 66). Julia Kristeva derives her theory of intertextuality
from Michael Bakhtin’s idea of a polyphonic novel
open to various voices
and interpretations. She understands a literary text as part of other
literary texts in the history of the literary tradition. As a consequence,
the idea of authorship is undermined and it can be said that the text is
not a product of one author, but exists within specific literary and
cultural contexts and it is open to various understandings and
interpretations. Direct reference, allusion, quotation plagiarism, collage
and mosaics are the most common techniques to build
intertextual networks of literary texts.
Intertextuality is a feature that texts have of being full of snatches of
other texts
that can be demarcated
or merged into
. Kristeva
distinguishes two types of intertextuality, horizontal
and vertical
or
what Fairclough calls: manifest intertextuality
and constitutive
intertextuality
. On one hand, horizontal
or manifest intertextuality
consists of direct discourse representation
in which parts of other texts
are integrated into a text and generally are delimitated by certain devices
as quotation marks
. Vertical
or constitutive intertextuality
, on the
other hand, refers to the configuration of discourse conventions that go
into production of the text
(Fairclough 1992: 104). The constitutive
intertextuality
is less explicit and less literal. Fairclough states that
a text may incorporate another text without the latter being explicitly
cued:one can respond to another text in the way one words one‘s own text
(1992: 102).
For long stretches of text Nice Work seems to be a canonical
realist novel but interspersed with these stretches Lodge introduces a
myriad of intertextual elements in the text. In fact, in
Nice Work Robyn Penrose claims as a metafictional mouthpiece, that
novels” are not simple and to the point because difficulty generates
meaning
(Nice Work 333). In what follows, several intertextual
devices will be analyzed as discursive devices that break with the
syntagmatic flow of the main frame of the narrative and which thereby
dislocate the realist illusion.
- Constitutive Intertextuality
According to Fairclough, constitutive intertextuality
is about merging
prior texts in new ones which may assimilate, contradict or ironically
echoes them. As regards production, he also states that an intertextual
perspective stresses the historicity of text
(1992). David Lodge in his
aim to reproduce the use of history as a model of the realistic pole of
representation
(Hutcheon: 15) introduces in Nice Work two
well-known Victorian novels Hard Times (Dickens) and
North and South (Gaskell), which are both referred to in different
parts of the novel.
Hard Times
is not only alluded to in the prefaces but is also mentioned in several
references in Nice Work. First of all, Robyn deals with Dickens’
novel in her lectures and quotes an excerpt introducing a dull description
of Coketown (Nice Work, 76). Secondly, Robyn explains the meaning
of the following extract from her lecture: the alienation of work under
industrial capitalism can be overcome by an infusion of loving kindness and
imaginative play represented by […] the circus
(
Nice Work, 77). Thus, Dickens’ allusion or Robyn’s allusion to
Dickens migrates from the paratext (epigraph) to the text (Robyn’s
lecture).The theme introduced by this quote (capitalism) can be applied to
Robyn’s (the university) and Vic’s working life (the factory). Thirdly, she
moves on to quote Mr Sleary (a character in Hard Times...) You
muth have us, Thquire
and People mutht be amuthed
(Nice Work,
77) a section/ part of the quotation which the implied author uses as part
of the epigraph for the third section of Nice Work.
The lexeme muddle
appears in the novel several times and it can also be
connected with Hard Times. Firstly, When Robyn flies to Frankfurt
with Vic this phrase from Hard Times springs to her mind ‘Tis aw a muddle’
(Nice Work, 270) at the moment she is
thinking how important factories are. Secondly, she uses the word muddle
again after reading Charles’s letter. In this letter, Charles explains to
Robyn that he is going to change the course of his life and he is going to
live with Debby. The first thought that comes to her mind is You shit
,
You utter shit
, at the same time the narrator says there were things in
this letter which struck a nerve of reluctant assent, mixed up with things
she found false and obnoxious. ’T was all a muddle.
(Nice Work,
315). Finally, the term muddle
is used in Nice Work by Rupert
Sutcliffe during a discussion about the department’s syllabus and Rupert
says the question is whether we have a system any more, or just a muddle.
A muddle this document will only exacerbate
(Nice Work, 351).
In Nice Work, Lodge also included some references to North and South but the most important one is the striking resemblance in the plot- line between Nice Work and North and South. This extract is from North and South and prefaces chapter two
Mrs Thornton went on after a moment’s pause:
Do you know anything of Milton, Miss Hale; have you seen any of our factories? our magnificent warehouses?
No, said Margaret.I have not seen anything of that description as yet.Then she felt that, by concealing her utter indifference to all such places, she was hardly speaking the truth; so she went on:
I dare say, papa would have taken me before now if I had cared. I really do not find much pleasure in going over manufactories.(Gaskell)
This quotation shows how Margaret, like Robyn, feels utter dislike towards the world of the factory.
Another example of this similitude between the two female characters is how Margaret and Robyn start feeling affected by workers’ conditions. In the case of Margaret, she is forced to leave her home in the quiet rural south, and has to settle with her parents in the industrial town of Milton where she witnesses the harsh unrelenting world shaped by the industrial revolution and where employers and workers clash in the first organised strikes. Sympathetic to the poor whose courage and tenacity admires, Margaret clashes with John Thornton , a cotton mill manufacturer who belongs to the new riches and whose scornful attitude to workers Margaret disdains. On the other hand, when Robyn visits Pringle & Sons and she wants to help Danny Ram she also feels completely moved by workers’ conditions and says:
He was the noble savage, the Negro in chains, the archetype of exploited humanity, quintessential victim of the capitalist-Imperialist –industrial system. It was as much as she could do to restrain herself from rushing forward to grasp his hand in a gesture of sympathy and solidarity. (133)
The citation below from North and South is used in the epigraph of Chapter 4 where Vic and Robyn start to get to know each other and to understand each other’s jobs. The quote introduces key words related to capitalism and the world of the factory, which links up with Lodge’s chapter by anticipating Vic‘s own explanation of his work at the factory.
I know so little about strikes, and rates of wages, and capital, and labour that I had better not talk to a political economist like you.
Nay, the more reason,said he eagerly.I shall be only too glad to explain to you all that may seemanomalous or mysterious to a stranger; especially at a time like this, when our doings are sure to be canvassed by every scribbler who can hold a pen.
There is also a similarity between
John Thornton
(North and South) and Vic Wilcox (Nice Work). In both
novels the male character is an advocate of capitalism. Both of them are
managers of an important industrial company and eventually fall in love
with an intelligent woman. Finally, they lose their jobs and it is the
female character who lends him the money she has inherited to recover his
social position. As Robyn says in Nice Work (83) all the
Victorian novelist could offer as a solution to the problems of industrial
capitalism were: a legacy, a marriage, emigration or death
.Although
Nice Work is not a Victorian novel, the solution is also legacy as
Robyn inherits money which she then gives to Vic to set up his own
business.
To sum up, Nice Work has a lot of allusions to Hard Times
and North and South as a means of incorporating the past into the
present
(Hutcheon 118).
- Manifest Intertextuality
An intertextual element present in Nice Work is the physical
intrusion of newspaper clippings
(Hutcheon 89). They occur quite
frequently in the first chapter where Vic’s daily routine is described and
it is not only the content that is included but also the form is mimicked.
For example, there is a piece of news written in capital letters taken from
the Daily Mail:
MURDOCH FACING UNION CLASH. THE IMAN’S CALL TO PRAYER MAKES THE VICAR TALK OF BEDLAM. HEARTACHE AHEAD FOR THE BRIDE WHO MARRIED TWICE .WE’RE IN THE SUPERLEAGUE OF NATIONS. Hang out. (24)
This typographical reproduction works as a sort of collage because it does
not bring into the text an actual fragment of a real referent
but a
textualized representation
of it (Hutcheon 1989:88). This example depicts
how the reader‘s linear reading is disrupted by the presence of a different
typing on the same page subverting the conventions of Realism. This is also
another way of calling attention to the text itself rather than to the
referent.
Intertextuality is also present with the introduction of a memo that the university received informing about the shadowing:
From: The vice- Chancellor To: Deans of all Faculties
Subject : INDUSTRY YEAR SHADOW SCHEME
As you are no doubt aware, 1986 has been designated Industry Year by the government. The DES, through the UGC, have urged the CVCP to ensure that universities throughout the UK- (end of memo in the novel, incomplete as it is). (84)
The memo is then followed by a dialogue between Pamela and Phillip and then the rest of the memo is included. Thus, syntagmatic contiguity is thereby doubly disrupted by this device: firstly, the dialogue between Pamela and Philip is dislocated by the first part of the memo, and then the memo is disrupted by the comments from Pamela and Philip which in turn is interrupted again by their reading of the rest of the memo.
The last intertextual example is a letter (page 310-314) written by Charles to Robyn when he decides to go to live with Debbie to become a merchant banker:
My dear Robyn,
I have tried to phone you several times without success, and the secretary
of your Department refuses for some reason to admit that she knows where
you are, so I am writing to you- which is probably the best thing to do,
anyway, in the circumstances. The telephone is an unsatisfactory medium for
communicating anything important, allowing neither the genuine absence of
writing nor the true presence of face-to –face conversation, but only a
feeble compromise. A thesis topic there,perhaps? Telephonic communication
and affective alienation in modern fiction, with special reference to
Evelyn Waugh, Ford Madox Ford, Henry Green…
But I’ve finished with thesis topics. What I have to tell you is that I have determined upon a change of career. I’m going to become a merchant banker.
The introduction of the letter interrupts the previous description of Robyn’s commuting back home from the university. In terms of realist fiction, the letter is a well –known device for showing rather than telling. The artifice is used to better depict Charles’s own voice in abandoning her for Debbie. In fact, the letter and the memo do not belong to another, different text by another author but to the same fictional world.
All in all, these intertextual elements remind the reader of the fictiveness of the realist representation.
4.2.2.2. Paratextuality
Postmodern novels focus on the processes of both the production
and
reception of fictive historical writing
(Hutcheon 1989).This
incorporation is done through metafictional paratextual conventions like
footnotes, illustrations, subtitles, prefaces, epigraphs and so on. In
fact, as Hutcheon asserts, paratextuality still remains a central way of
textually certifying historical events.
Linda Hutcheon in her book The Politics of Postmodernism (1989)
claims that paratexts are conventions that histographic metafiction uses
and abuses to show that they create forms and to assert its factuality.
She alsoaffirms that This postmodern use of paratextualityas a formal mode
of overt intertextuality both works within and subverts that apparatus of
Realism still typical of the novel genre , even in its more fictional
form
.
Nice Work is a reworking of the Victorian novel but within a new context (transcontextualization) and the paratextual elements are present in it to provide the reader the historical acknowledgement of the authors mentioned.
Nice Work
is divided into six chapters and each of them has a quotation from a
Victorian book which is one way in which Lodge pays homage to Victorian
novels. According to Barbara Sramkova in her Seminar Paper Elements of
Parody in David Lodge’s Nice Work
(2005) the mottos can be
regarded as parodies on their own, when we accept the proposition that “the
most literal quotation is already a kind of parody because of its
“transtextualization”
(2005:6) Sramkova, however, does not further connect
this to the realist mode. In this thesis transcontextualization is one
other technique or device that breaks with contiguity and that pushes the
boundaries of the realist illusion.
In fact, this device is used throughout the novel; each chapter includes an
epigraph from writers from the nineteenth century defying the novel‘s
compositional processes. Although all the epigraphs are important only some
of them will be quoted. The first citation is a clear reference to the
industrial novel Upon the midlands now the industrious muse doth fall, the
shires which we the heart of England well may call
which is a
quote from the poem Poly –Olbion (1912) from Drayton.
The second example is an extract from Benjamin Disraeli’s novel Sybil; or The Two nations (1845):
Two nations; betweenwhom there is no intercourse and no sympathy; who are as ignorant of each other’s habits, thoughts and feelings, as if they were dwellers in different breeding , and fed by different food, and ordered by different manners....’
You speak of –said Egremont hesitantly.
This quotation with a more figurative meaning in Nice Work shows the different worlds of Robyn and Vic as well as the divergence between the world of the university and the world of the factory (Gutleber 2001).
Moreover, Lodge prefaces the chapters of Nice Work with excerpts from Victorian books that Robyn cites during her lectures on industrial novels. For instance, Shirley from Charlotte Bronte in chapter one:
If you think...that anything like a romance is preparing for you, reader, you were never more mistaken. Do you anticipate sentiment, and poetry and reverie? Do you expect passion, and stimulus and melodrama? Calm your expectations reduce them to a lowly standard. Something real, cool and“sordid lies before you; something unromantic as Monday morning, when
all who have work wake with the consciousness that they must rise and betake themselves thereto.
In the first excerpt, after the characters are minutely introduced and they
get ready to go to work, the reader is warned not to expect anything like
a romance
as it is only Monday morning. In terms of form, the literary
citation already introduces the device of the intrusive narrator (for you,
reader…Do you anticipate sentiment…?
etc.).In terms of thematic content,
the citation sarcastically comments on Vic and Robyn’s dull or monotonous
daily routine.
In chapters three and five, there are epigraphs from Hard Times,
Charles Dickens. People muth be amuthed they can’t be alwayth a learning,
nor yet they can’t be alwayth a working.They an’t made for it.
This
quotation is used in chapter three where Vic and Robyn’s spare
time is described. Dickens’ words set a balance between work and pleasure
and focus on the importance of everyone’s personal life. The quotation of
Chapter five reads as follows:
Some persons hold, he pursued, still hesitating,that there is wisdom of the Head, and that there is wisdom of the Heart. I have not supposed it so; but, as I have said, I mistrust myself now. I have supposed the head to be all-sufficient. It may not be all-sufficient; how can I venture this morning to say it is!
The quote is again from Hard Times and introduces the chapter where Vic experiences a change rediscovering that emotions play a vital role in life too. The narrator also focuses on the fact that both intellect and emotions go hand in hand in people’s lives and that it is impossible to consider one more important thanthe other.
Chapter two and four are from North and South discussed in Constitutive intertextuality (see 30-32).
Finally, the final epigraph of Nice Work is again from Shirley:
The story is told. I think I now see the judicious reader putting on his spectacles to look for the moral. It would be an insult to his sagacity to offer directions. I only say, God speed him in the quest!
This quotation forces the intrusive narrator back on the stage. The text craves for a reader eager to find his or her own moral or attitude. It also signals the end or closure of the novel (The story is told).
As a conclusion, it can be said that the epigraphs that preface the novel
Nice Work are direct quotations from well-known realist canonical
works which try to anticipate the content of the chapters to the reader
breaking again the illusion of verisimilitude. The epigraphs establish a
metaphorical relation with the text they precede since they are chosen so
that similarities and differences between them are highlighted .In this way
the novel becomes multivocal, as it was mentioned before, and this is a
feature of metaphor rather than metonymy or Realism. The paratextual
devices analyzed above lend proof to Hutcheon’s claims as Lodge’s use of
inter- and –para- texts works to abuse the realist apparatus of
Nice Work. Genette says that The epigraph in itself is a signal
(intended as a sign) of culture, a password of intellectuality.While the
author awaits hypothetical newspaper reviews, literary prizes, and other
official recognitions, the epigraph is already, a bit, his consecration.
With it, he chooses his peers and thus his place in the pantheon
4.2.2.3 Metatextuality
Metatextuality is the transtextual relationship that joins a commentary to
the text it comments upon (without necessarily citing it)
(Genette 1987).
As regards Nice Work, Robyn reads a lot; she reads Freud, Marx,
Kafka and Kierkegaard. She subscribes to journals like Poetique
and Tel quel when she studies her PhD. This education shapes Robyn
and leads her to the habit of quoting theorists when she speaks. She
forced her mind through the labyrinthine sentences of Jacques Lacan and
Jacques Derrida
(Nice Work, 46). While she is teaching she makes
use of theories to explain different topics to her students. All her speech
is interwoven with fragments alluding to one theory or another and all the
time she is describing reality in theoretical terms.In fact, both the
narrator and the character interpret action in the novel through literary
works for example, when the narrator quotes D. H Lawrence as well as
Saussure to illustrate that Robyn and Charles are more interested in
thoughts and theories than in earthly matters like sex. What was left was
sex in the head
, as D.H. Lawrence called it. Lawrence had meant the phrase
pejoratively, of course, but to Robyn and Charles D.H. Lawrence was a
quaint, rather absurd figure, and his fierce polemics did not disturb them.
Where else would the human subject have sex but in the head? Sexual desire
was a play of signifiers
, an infinite deferment
and displacement of
anticipated pleasure which the brute coupling of the signifieds temporarily
interrupted (Nice Work, 56-57).
As the passage quoted shows, references to Saussure‘s linguistic model
(play of signifiers
) and to Derrida‘s linguistic sign (an infinite
deferment
) abound amid pedestrian descriptions of daily life matters (They
are in bed). This fact is still another source of metatextuality and
contributes to the introduction of different levels of literariness in the
novel. This is a novel that establishes multiple links with other literary
works, literary books, the media and documentsthrough its actions, its
characters and the metafictional intent of its narrator:
There is no such thing as an author, that is to say, one who originates a work of fiction ab nihilo. Every text is a product of intertextuality, a tissue of allusions to and citations of other texts; and, in the famous words of Jacques Derrida (famous to people like Robyn, anyway),
il n’y a pas the hors-texte, there is nothing outside the text. There are no origins, there is only production, and we produce ourselvesin language. Notyou are what you eatbutyou are what you speakor, ratheryou are what speaks you, is the axiomatic basis of Robyn’s philosophy, which she would call, if required to give it a namesemiotic materialism. (Nice Work, 40)
The excerpt clearly foregrounds the novel’s own compositional procedure:
i.e. that metatextuality is a device which breaks with mimetic illusion
since this implies a difference between text and the outside of text
.
Literary theory becomes the subject of the conversation between Charles and Robyn one Sunday when they are together in her house talking seriously and they quote Lacan, and Saussure again in their conversation and they use the lexical terms metonymy, metaphor and synecdoche in their speech:
Any good?she inquired, nodding at his book.
Not bad. Quite good on the de-centring of the subject, actually. You remember that marvellous bit in Lacan?Charles read out a quotation:’ I think where I am not, therefore I am where I think not… I am not, wherever I am the plaything of my thought; I think of what I am wherever I don’t think I am thinking .
Marvellous,Robyn agreed.
There’s quite a good discussion of it in here.
Isn’t that where Lacan says something interesting about realism?
Yes: “This two-faced mystery is linked to the fact that the truth can be evoked only in that dimension of alibi in which all ‘realism’ in creative works takes its virtue from metonymy.”Robyn frowned.
What do you think it means, exactly? I mean, is “truth” being used ironically?
Oh, I think so, yes. It’s implied by the word “alibi”, surely? There is no “truth”, in the absolute sense, no transcendental signified. Truth is just a rhetorical illusion, a tissue of metonymies and metaphors, as Nietzsche said. It all goes back to Nietzsche, really, as this chap points out.(177)
Such a discussion draws attention to the compositional procedures behind all realist fiction. It also refers to the fundamental epistemic discussion that underwrites Realism.
4.2.2.4 Hypertextuality -Parody
Framed within the theory of intertextuality, Hutcheon’s study on parody
[1] is vital for the
examination of the past which Nice Work tries to reconstruct.
However, no study of parody is possible without mentioning again Gerard
Genette, whose seminal work on parody in Palimpsests (1982, trans.
English 1997) has had a massive influence on the critical scrutiny of how
texts either imitate or include other texts. As it is well known, for
Genette any writing is rewriting; and literature is always in the second
degree
(G. Prince, Foreword
to Palimpsests, 1997: ix). Genette draws a
fundamental distinction between textual imitation (pastiche, caricature,
forgery) and transformation ( parody, travesty, transposition) and he
considers that parody is a form of transposing, deforming, or simply
modifying a text by diverting it to another context or object
(1997:10-11).Thorough as Genette's taxonomy is, it does not however go as
far as to consider within parody the forms of metafiction and
self-reflexivity that Linda Hutcheon embraces in her own theory of parody.
And thus Hutcheon's perspective will be examined in this thesis to sustain
that parody can occur when whole elements of one work are lifted out of
their context and reused, though not necessarily to be ridiculed.
In The Theory of Parody (1985), in fact, Linda Hutcheon postulates
that the main objective of postmodern parody is not to ridicule a parodied
author, style or genre but to emphasize the differences between the past
and the present. She also claims that Postmodern parody is both
deconstructively critical and constructively creative, paradoxically making
us aware of both the limits and the power of representation, in any medium
(Hutcheon 1991:228). Hutcheon further adds that as a form of ironic
representation, parody is doubly coded in political terms: it both
legitimizes and subverts that which it parodies
and can in fact be used
as a self-reflexive technique that points to art as art, but also to art
as inescapably bound to its aesthetic and even social past
(Hutcheon
1991:231). By rewriting, transforming and changing styles from the parodied
works, postmodern parody offers an alternative vision of reality and
history and a position of different social, ethnic and other minority
groups which is not considered the official version of reality or history
but a reconsideration of it.
Hutcheon's notion of parody as a self-reflexive technique that points to art as art is crucial for the study of Nice Work as there are several elements of parody which disrupt the illusion of Realism. One reason behind the prevalence of this recontextualizing type of parody in the 20th century, and in particular in Lodge's work, is that contemporary artists like him have sought to connect with the [literary] past while registering differences brought on by modernity. In what follows, then, parody as repetition with a difference will be studied.
- Parody as repetition with a difference (same circumstances and different attitudes)
The Victorian tradition in terms of love relations between women and men
saw marriage as a way of sorting out the problems of industrial capitalism.
As it is well known, in the Victorian Era women were seen, by the middle
classes at least, as belonging to the house-bound sphere, and this
stereotype required them to run the house, to make meals for their husband
and to bring up their children. Women's rights were extremely restricted in
this era, losing ownership of their wages, in the case they worked, and all
of their physical property, excluding land. Thus, when a Victorian man and
woman married, under the law, the law regarded the couple as one person.
The husband was responsible for his wife and bound by law to protect her
and the wife had to obey, placing him in control of all property, and to
crown the whole, women themselves became property
to their husbands,
giving them rights to what their bodies produced: children, sex, and
domestic labour.
Thus, marriage made women lose the right to acquiesce to sexual intercourse
with her husband, giving him ownership
over her body. Their mutual
matrimonial consent therefore became a contract to give herself to her
husband as he desired (see Wikipedia, Marriage and the Home,
In: Women in
the Victorian Era). In Nice Work, ironically, Robyn refuses
Charles’ marriage proposal (380), which is parodically contrary to
Victorian heroines’ attitudes. In that period marriage was one of the most
precious aims in women’s life. No doubt, in tandem with contemporary times,
and as a feminist, Robyn is opposed to marriage as a bourgeois institution,
and she is willing to renounce her inheritance in favour of Vic’s business
Take it, she says
. Use it. I don’t want it (…)
(381), she said.
There is in Nice Work a parodic inversion of the correct
or
appropriate
moral codes of Victorian Society. The Victorian era was
considered a period of many contradictions such as a widespread cultivation
of superficial appearance of sexual restraint and a strict social code of
conduct with the prevalence of the social phenomena such as prostitution
and child labour. As regards sex, women to be considered a prospective
wife, they had to be virgins and to remain innocent and free from any
thoughts of love and sexuality
until they had received a proposal (Kane
97). Men, on the other hand, had the freedom to participate in premarital
and extramarital sexual relationships. In Nice Work, while Robyn
conforms to the contemporary feminist doxa, and seems to be interested in
sex at an intellectual level; it is Vic who becomes infatuated and
hopelessly romantic. Robyn, on the other hand, rejects and dismisses the
concept of love in their relationship– considering their sexual encounter
as just a fuck. Nothing more or less
.These are very different codes from
contemporary women unacceptable for Victorian times. It was impossible for
a woman to express such feelings openly or even conceive of such a feeling.
Another clear example of a reversal of expectations that supports this idea is when Robyn and Vic are in Frankfurt at the hotel at the point of having sex since the woman is traditionally considered to be emotional and men rational.
Robyn’s mood is blithe. She feels mildly wanton, but not wicked. She sees herself not as seducing Vic but as putting him out of his misery.There is of course always a special excitement about the first time with a new partner. Her heart beats faster than if she were going to bed with Charles. But she is not anxious. She is in control. Perhaps she feels a certain sense of triumph at her conquest: the captain of industry at the feet of the feminist literary critic- a pleasing tableau (289).
As regards Robyn, the narrator uses the lexemes blithe
, wanton but not
wicked
(285-291) as well as the phrases she is in control
and a certain
sense of triumph
to show Robyn’s feelings. Here again there is a parodic
inversion of roles
because in Victorian times women used to be associated
with passivity, emotion, submission and dependence and in the case of
Robyn, she is the one who takes the reins of the situation.
For Vic the event is infinitely more momentous, his mood infinitely more perturbed. The prospect of going to bed with Robyn Penrose is the secret dream of weeks come true, yet there is something hallucinatory about the ease with his wish has been granted. He regards himself with wonderment led by hand by this handsome young woman towards her bedroom, as if his soul is stumbling along out of step behind his body (289).
Conversely, Vic, seems to be more involved in the situation, and the
expressions infinitely more momentous
, hallucionary
, wonderment
and
his soul out of step behind his body
would seem to depict how excited he
feels as the dream of many weeks is about to come true.
Contrary to the Victorian doxa where according to which men had the
capacity forreason, action, aggression, independence and self-interest, Vic
seems to be the weaker sex andRobynseems to take advantage ofhis
fragility.Robyn is the one in control of the situation and says But I
prefer to be on the top
and Vic is the one who shows that he is fragile
and in love:I love you
he says , kissing her throat ,stroking her
breasts, tracing the curve of her hip.”
In Nice Work, some metafictional parodic parallels are established at the level of thematic content by backgrounding some telling hints from Charles Dicken's Hard Times (1854). For example, Robyn in one of her lectures describes the industrial novel through an extract from this novel:
Mr Grandgrind in Hard Times embodies the spirit ofIndustrial Capitalism as Dickens saw it. His philosophy is utilitarian. He despises emotion and the imagination, and believes only in Facts. The novel shows, among other things, the disastrous effects of this philosophy on Mr. Grandgrind’s own children, Tom, who becomes a thief, and Louisa, who nearly becomes an adulteress, and on the lives of working people in the city of Coketown which is made in his image, a dreary placecontaining:Several streets all very like one another, inhabited by people equally like another , who went in and out at the same hours, with the same sound upon the same payments, to dothe same work, and to whom every day was the same as yesterday and tomorrow and every day the counterpart of the last and the next (76-77).
Readers can easily notice at this point in Nice Work that Vic is similar to Mr. Grandgrind in his materialist vision of life and, though his family has not reached the same situation as Mr. Grandgrind’s, Vic’s expectations are not fulfilled in terms of his children’s careers. For example, Vic’s son does not study anymore and Sandra, his daughter, wants to be a hairdresser instead of studying a university career. In fact, it is not the kind of family that a hard- working man aspires to have.
Nice Work also has some resemblances with the book North and South from Elizabeth Gaskell. In The Novel in the Victorian Age, Robin Gilmour put emphasis on the idea that in North and South there is a conflict of values:
and this conflict of values is focused and developedin the turbulent relationships of Margaret and JohnThornton, an affair of sharp oppositions managed by Gaskell with a fine sense of the sexual piquancy that lies in the mutual attraction of two proud and powerful natures”(qtd. in Aida Diaz Build 53)
This conflict of sharp oppositions is also found in Nice Work because Vic and Robyn both have strong personalities and they defend their ideas fervently. Besides, the mutual understanding between the characters is a kind of solution between the two opposite worlds they represent.
Nice Work
thus includes quotations from such Victorian novels as Hard Times
and North and South to underscore an imitation which endeavours
to revise previous literary productions in the light of an entire new
“enunciation discourse” a whole new context which transforms the essence of
the target text and gives birth to a new bitextual synthesis
.The bitextual
qualities of parody imply the presence of both the foregrounded
or
present work and a backgrounded or antecedent text
. ( Hutcheon 1985).
This suggests that the realist illusion is thereby disrupted by the many
overt or explicit references to other well-known literary classics to which
Lodge pays intertextual homage. Not only is the text doubled but also the
socio-cultural realities they allude to.
5. CONCLUSION
In terms of the hypothesis purported by this thesis, certain narratological
devices such as metafiction and forms of breaking frame
and certain
textual devices as intertextuality, metatextuality, paratextuality and
parody would contribute to undermine in Nice Work the many mimetic
principles of the realist illusion.
This thesis has shown how Nice Work is at times written
in a style that to a certain extent complies with many realist conventions.
Probably the most noticeable ones are the use of repetition, redundancy and
the inclusion of ritualized activities. Characters, places and ritualized
activities are depicted in full detail; including the so-called
superfluous notations
of the reality effect that only fulfill a
summatory
function in their descriptions. These characters’ physical
descriptions and their surrounding hallmarks become
“trait–connoting
.Textual Cohesion is another successful reality–enhancing
mechanism present in Nice Work with its tight use of
co-referentiality and co-extension. The presence of antonyms shows the
divergence between the world of University and the world of the factory as
well as the different kinds of life Robyn and Vic lead. The use of names
such as Vic, Robyn and Rummidge support the realist conventions because
they help to create a realist illusion.
However, the extracts analyzed have also revealed the presence of other
features that subvert the mimetic contiguity of canonical realist fiction.
This has been the case of the intrusive narrator that abruptly interrupts
the metonymic flow of the narrative as well as of the parenthetical
asides
to the reader, where sometimes a large chunk of information is
planted amidst a description, thereby interrupting the narrative flow of
the story in the present time.
In addition, the use of metafiction reveals the artificiality of the text
as an artistic product, as the intertextual elements constantly remind the
educated reader of the fictional character of the whole through the novel's
acknowledgment of Victorian literary pieces. Paratextual elements are used
as instances of syntax of authority
(Susan Sniader Lanser 1999.) The
epigraphs in the six chapters are a way that Lodge found to pay homage to
Victorian novels and to bring the past into the novel. Last ,parody plays a
minor role but yet, a significant one by showing that
Nice Work, like many other postmodernist novels, tries to
bring the past into the present with a slight sense of irony and a double
coding, as Hutcheon would say, both of which recuperate the past and
subverts it in one and the same movement. These devices break with mimesis
and change the focus from the referent towards the work itself. Thus, the
novel becomes self-referential.
Judging from all that has been said above, it can be claimed that
Nice Work is built on realist traits, which it takes pleasure in
debunking here and there. No savvy reader would be able to ignore the
intrusive narrator, or how intertextuality and parody subvert the realist
traits present in the novel. Therefore, the idea that language is
transparent and that there is one- to one-correspondence is constantly
debunked just as the reader begins to feel comfortable within the mimetic
illusion. Linda Hutcheon has explained that postmodernism uses
and
(12) at the same time, subverts and enhances the previous
tradition. Under the light of this postulation Nice Work can be
understood as a fine example of a new but revisited Realism.
abuses
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[1]
Hutcheon stresses the notion that the etymological root of the term
parody in Greek has two meanings. The prefix para may
refer to the notion of counter
or against
(as in to
say or to sing in counterpoint
) or it can also mean along
or
beside
(as in to sing along somebody else), which for Hutcheon
suggests intimacy instead of a contrast
(1985: 32). It is this
second meaning of the prefix that Hutcheon focuses on for it
broadens the scope of parody, as it underscores that parody goes
beyond the conventional ethos of ridicule to include, for instance,
the deferential ethos
(Ibid.: 57).
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